Three lines, 5–7–5
Haiku
A haiku makes a small space feel large. It places two images beside each other and lets the reader feel the turn between them.
Try HaikuThe shape
- Three lines with five, seven, and five syllables.
- One concrete image usually does more than an abstract explanation.
- The final line often changes how the first two lines are understood.
A good place to use it
A precise observation, a season, or a brief moment that contains more than it explains.
Try this
- Describe something ordinary without naming the feeling it gives you.
- Put two unrelated things in the same weather.
- Read the finished poem aloud; count with your ear as well as the tool.
A small example
Late train window One moth circles the platform No one gets off
Keep in mind
- Three lines: five syllables, seven, then five.
- Traditionally one image, and a turn or surprise in the last line.
- Present tense does most of the work.